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Inside My Mind


Author: Ashleigh Mari
ASL Info:    16/ F/ IN
Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 21 /64 /12
Words: 141
Class/Type: Poetry /The pain inside
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Inside My Mind



Lost inside my mind
Is a voice that isn’t so clear
A voice that’s lost day to day
Heard only when in tears

The voice says no
But I cut anyway
How else can it end
It helps to stop the pain

Eyes look at my body
They focus on the scars
They haven’t seen half of it
If they only look at my arms

I have cuts on every inch
A pale, ghostly body I hide everyday
The voice that’s inside of it
Is begging to escape

I lock inside of myself
And let no one come in
I wait for the darkness to cover me
And wait for my life to end

Lost inside my mind
Is a voice that isn’t so clear
A voice dying little by day
Heard only through fear




Submitted on 2005-11-03 12:11:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH
| Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by bloody_carebear | [ Reply to This ]
  i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH
| Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by bloody_carebear | [ Reply to This ]
  i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH
| Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by bloody_carebear | [ Reply to This ]
  i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH
| Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by bloody_carebear | [ Reply to This ]
  i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH i'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAHi'm such an idiot but i need to get my comments up... omg... i'm such a fake... lol. but, i can't get on too much anymore so i'm going to post this same comment about 500 times to get it back up... i'm a loser... my mom banned me from the net because she's a total [censored] and got mad, blamed me for viruses... whatever... anyways...

CAH
| Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by bloody_carebear | [ Reply to This ]
  I know we aren't supposed to say "i can relate" but i can and i'm not proud of it. but i can relate. I used to hate other people who cut because it was for different reasons than me so i thought that i was different and that i didn't have to tell anyone because i had it undercontrol...i was wrong. i was hospitalized for attempted suicide and then for severe depression about 4 months after my boyfriend commited suicide and i had just started to deal with it...
thats all i have to say. leave me a post. thanks
xoxox
Reeses
| Posted on 2005-11-11 00:00:00 | by Numb | [ Reply to This ]
  IF you cut stop. I know it's hard i use to cut, havent in three months, and even though it doesn't seem that long now if you try to stop it will. This was a really good poem and i loved the flow of it. How you used your words to capture you emotions and how you just went with it. Nicely done.
Much Support,
Danni
| Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
  I want bash it. You have a written a very good poem. It shows where your heart and soul is currently at. I do worry that you have given up and your willing to let your pain control you. Everyone of us has to walk through this and there is a way out of it. Besides Death. I'll pray for you so you can get some relief and some light into your life. I don't know if you'll understand what I'm talking about, but give sometime and you'll see.
God Bless,
lynn
| Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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