one cut to a million scares -------------------------------------------
one cut
two cuts
three cuts
four....
i cut
you cut
they've cut more
five cuts
six cuts
seven cuts
eight....
i sceam
you've sceamed
they scream
"whore"
nine cuts
ten cuts
"could you hurt me more"
eleven cuts
twelve cuts
"please no more"
thirteen cuts
fourteen cuts
"just one more time"
fifteen cuts
and "now it ends"
one scare for the day i was born
two scares for you mother
three scares becase i was daddy little girl
four scares for what you gave up
and five for what you gave to me
six scares for the day we move
seven for the first day of school
eight scares for the hate i endured
nine scares for her, my only friend
ten scares becase you both were drinking
eleven when daddy left
twelve when he died
thirteen scares becase mommys a whore
forteen becase mommy left too
finnaly fifteen becase she died to
behold my frail body's covored in million scares that you've left me
I really liked it. Was powerful with nothing held back. I disagree with Nathan; how can expressing a stringently abusive past be considered childish? Keep up the great work Tracy.
interesting...even more interesting is the fact that i thought about writing one like this a while ago...i like it, but it does seem a little childish...which is the reason i didnt' write the one i was going to. This was creative and you did a very good job though
Submission Name: one cut to a million scares
