Can this be love?
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hm. figure this one out your self. i dont want to ruin it. bash it if you'd like though....
Can this be love?
what is this feeling in my heart? the slow flutter in my stomach. i feel as if i can fly way up above the clouds. just one look from you make my skin crawl. when you say my name i shiver. is this what i think it is....? can it be? maybe i fell into the looking glass, maybe its not real. but if its not dont tell me, please. i want to feel this way forever. you touch my hand and i want to whisper sweet nothings into your hair. i resist. Do you love me too? or is this all an act, to lure me in? i feel so safe in your arms. you will protect me from any harm. when your in my pressence i can feel your heart beat in rhythm with mine. i can not believe i have found this one true happiness. i lean my head onto your shoulder and stare at the sunset. slowly you kiss the top of my head lightly and smile. i can feel your energy all around me. just thoughts of you fill my mind all day. i can barely wait until i see you again. i am truely in love. |
Submitted on 2005-11-03 18:35:04 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| I almost forgot the feeling of falling in love. There is nothing like it on earth. You had a great flow of emotions coming out this piece and you show a true heart. Good work. lynn | Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ] | this is a great idea and a great feeling but you need to expand. This is sort of cliché-ish and over done. Add some imagination and unique aspects to make you stand out. | | Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by beldolore | [ Reply to This ] | |
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