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    dots Submission Name: Lowering of the Cloudsdots
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    Author: StevenJay
    ASL Info:    21, Male, Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 27/36/14
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLowering of the Cloudsdots
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    Lowering of the clouds
    The beauty of covered shadows
    Invisible once again,
    Shivers strike as the wind sings
    Every note is perfect
    With the sun trapt behind a cloak,
    Cool drops fall like the leaves on an autumn day
    Wishing they would dance in the wind forever
    No direction, only fate to control their destiny
    Admired the grace, the peacefulness
    No fear, no feelings, nothing,
    Lowering of the clouds
    Opening of umbrellas
    Hidden in the rain.




    Submitted on 2005-11-04 12:45:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      what a nice way to describe a funeral you could have went more into describeing the spirit of the person than just the day the lowering of the clouds sounds like the box being put in the grave. wishing that the leaves would dance in the air forever well we that can not happen with the pysical but in the spirit it goes on forever
    | Posted on 2005-11-04 00:00:00 | by papalegba | [ Reply to This ]


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