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Author: angel_eyes9701
ASL Info:    24 F Salem, OR
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Words: 60
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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Just a small tribute to my bestfriends Stacy, Jessie and Summer. We are all like sisters, been there for each other for years.


Friends



Standing by,
All the way.
Here to help you through your day.

Holding you up,
When you are weak,
Helping you find what it is you seek.

Catching your tears,
When you cry.
Pulling you through when the tide is high.

Just being there,
Through thick and thin,
All just to say, you are my friend.




Submitted on 2005-11-04 13:50:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i think everybody need a friend that you can always depend on. Through my years i've only had maybe two friends like that. But i think everybody need that one person in there life like that. good job
| Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by Tash | [ Reply to This ]
  it’s a short sweet poem this one. friends I’ve had many type of friends. true friends, I think maybe I could count them on one hand. then there are user friends those are the type that hang around when they need something mostly in my drug days. then there are false friends these are sort of like those user friends but they get real close to you and eventually they turn bad by betrayal. geez sorry to bring out all this ugliness on such a lovely poem here. the poem itself is nice I wish all friends could have those qualities you have described support, faith, and loyalty. all though I would say there is a whole lot more depth than what makes a friend special. what you have is nice and best wishes for your circle of friends for whom you have so nicely dedicated to. nice write,

~mike
| Posted on 2005-11-04 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
  This was sweet. Very emotional as have such good friends always is. I am glad that you have such people in your life. I, for one, have not been granted with such a gift...but like i said, it always warms my heart knowing that someone else has someone for them. Great job.

-nathan
| Posted on 2005-11-04 00:00:00 | by Podenco del infierno | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a nice poem about friendship. Short and sweet but makes all the best points about what friendship is all about. Friends are so important in all our lives. They stand by you when things are tough and support you when you need support. They provide strength when you dont have any and make you smile even when you are sad. A lovely dedication to your friends. I am sure this will give them a smile. Take care.

Lorna
| Posted on 2005-11-04 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]


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