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    dots Submission Name: Embracedots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 796
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       The sweet release of posting...shouts of joy & gracious respect to Jimmy Da Man for his work to provide us shelter...Love, Peace, Joy!!!

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    Without seeing...
    Not needing...
    In darkness...

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      A delightful call to action! To be, rather than "not to be".

    A call to nobly go, and to better be!

    Much food for thought in this delightful short verse.
    | Posted on 2011-06-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      did you just finish watching Daredevil, or something? No, just playin'. I'm not sure I would post this as love though, it doesn't really seem to openly conceived as such. Good, yes, love? Not my take on this. After reading it a couple times it almost seems like something a motivational speaker would say. But i'm twacked in the head anyways, peace, love, and all that good shyt.
    | Posted on 2006-03-25 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      this was a very very interesting poem, and though it is somewhat obscure, i loved it. the simple message comes through, and makes you realize that poetry, and even life can be very simple, but still very very meaningful
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by colerinja | [ Reply to This ]
      I see what you are saying. An affirmation to just BE. I only wish life were that simple. If we could simply exist and find contentment in merely being.. Simply stated thoughts. I love minimalism.
    | Posted on 2004-04-22 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't like this type of style of poem or lyric or what ever the heck that you were trying to write, yet, who am I to critise, basically, I just don't understand that light warm phoney feeling of love...
    | Posted on 2004-04-26 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]

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