ready for you

Author: mimi ASL Info:    30/f/ny Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597 /390 /111 Words: 56

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ready for you

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i feel my walls pulsing getting ready to enfold your lenght embrace your strenght hard kisses with vise like teeth taking sips as your tounge dips into my moistness. fingers seek and find my places. tighten and melt, arched off the bed and emplail yourself to me. clutch at the sheets and wail a joyfull song.

Submitted on 2005-11-05 10:43:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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lost ans alone is right. it is a very intamite poem. I haven;'t had the coruage to post anything that intamite and personal yet, but maybe now that i know someone else has tried i'll try it to

| Posted on 2005-11-05 00:00:00 | by sweetme16 | [ Reply to This ]

This is defenitly a very intamite poem, and it's so great that you have the courage to share this. I have one myself that I finally got the nerve to post and it was so hard, to actually submit it to the world.

| Posted on 2005-11-05 00:00:00 | by lost and alone | [ Reply to This ]

Yeah, a very intimate poem. It was good though, I wouldn't post anything like that, maybe I'm just too...well, I dunno...brave enough, lol. But yea, great job.

| Posted on 2005-11-05 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]

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