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    dots Submission Name: grinning from ear to eardots
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    Author: lost and alone
    ASL Info:    19/F/Sandiego,CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 159/140/58
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 935
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    dotsgrinning from ear to eardots
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    The things you say,
    make me grin from ear to ear.
    I don't know how,
    you make me feel this way.
    So much love,
    and so much more.
    It's been so long since,
    I could honestly say
    " I love you" and really mean it.
    You make me feel so strong,
    Like I could fly away.
    but I won't leave you,
    because you've asked me to stay.
    I will love you forever,
    and a lifetime away.
    I want to be with you,
    together we will stay.




    Submitted on 2005-11-05 10:50:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Love it! It's so short and sweet, and the emotion is pouring out of it.
    You make me feel so strong,
    Like I could fly away.
    but I won't leave you,
    i like this part it shows that even if you could you wouldn't leave him... Good job!
    Much Love
    | Posted on 2005-11-05 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ]


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