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    dots Submission Name: The Kingpindots
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    Author: Robbing Hood
    ASL Info:    16/m/Ark
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 26/35/10
    Words: 268
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 727
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    dotsThe Kingpindots
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    I started the Aberrant Kings, let it be known/
    I'm the King of this shit and sooner or later I WILL take my throne/
    Me is the only affiliation I need/
    My thumb has turned green, now Ima plant my seed/
    Understand it? If you don't get a clue/
    I'm greater than you, and you, and you/
    Greater than me there is few/
    Fuck it, I'll say it, Theres none greater and its true/
    The KingPin is back, with words like crack/
    Many have the words but I have the have the act/
    Yes its true i have that/
    I'm rapping agian but now i have the Ark on my back/
    They should call me Noah cause I'm the only one to listen and follow/
    So now I have 2 of every dove and 2 of every swallow/
    Come to me, Come with a clip/
    My brother will call you a lie, and I'll call you a hit/
    I'll toe tag ya, body bag ya/
    Don't try to get at me because i'll get at ya/
    Give me two years and I'll destroy Wallstreet/
    Sell everything from real estate to processed meat/
    Oh no, I'm 2 Deep now, I'm 2 deep now/
    Your 2 deep now, my hollow tips are going 2 deep now/
    I feel like Micheal Jackson now cause it's 1,2,3/
    It's just You and Me/
    All it takes is me and my drum/
    We can do anything with the help of me and some rum/
    Let me get back to the bottom line, I'm The Kingpin/
    Sit on me, thats nothing less then a sin/




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      mutha [censored]a that [censored] is ....uhh....Dah...my bad...inside joke...nobody's gonna get it...this [censored] is nice man...I liked that shhit about dr. green thumb...
    | Posted on 2005-12-17 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
      The Kingpin huh? Get it boy!

    Do your lyrical thing! You are expressing your talents very well. I am into the hip-hop game so I know how to appreciate such work.

    Come hollar at me when you write more stuff. I can often disappear...

    Much love,

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      ur justin's friend aren't u. yeah...so u started the Aberrant Kings huh. tell me who else is in it so i can check them out on the site. it seemed like u weren't trying to get on top. i think ur saying that ur already there and that ur trying to say [censored] every body who has a problem with it. the flow was ok and so was the idea. u should just work on ur rhymes a lil bit. i'm not trying to diss u so don't get offended. i just know u can do better
    | Posted on 2005-11-06 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Okay...Well...It seemed almost random to me, I meanm I understood it I think, It just gaining your way to the top, doing anything you gotta do, manipulating, destroying, it doesn't matter at that point. At least that's what I think, Though I could be to stupid to actually get it. It made my brain hurt to read it truthfully, it was too...pushed together, for lack of a better description. But I got through it, so you get brownie points for that. It's very unique, I don't htink I've ever seen anything quite like it.

    Karios
    "Help Me, OH God! My Bangs are on fire!"
    | Posted on 2005-11-05 00:00:00 | by Karios | [ Reply to This ]


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