Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Taco Belldots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Big J
    ASL Info:    22/m/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 20/29/12
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 261
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 581



    Description:
       i love the bell


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTaco Belldots
    -------------------------------------------


    Between the realms of heaven and hell,
    Resides a place known as Taco Bell.
    With the beef burritos and fire sauce,
    Without the Bell all would be lost.

    Paradise is not found in money or fame,
    But at the reseraunt with the heavenly name.
    With Nachos Bel Gande, and Chalupas galore,
    You know the place I do adore.

    If I had one wish, you know what it would be,
    to eat gorditas for eternity.
    It's time to have joy, it's time to have fun,
    it's time for us to think outside the bun




    Submitted on 2005-11-06 02:34:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      lol This is pretty cute!
    I worked at Taco Bell for awhile in high school, and after that experience it took me a while to be able to eat there again, but once I did I love it! lol
    This is really cute and has a good flow. Nice work.
    Traci :)
    | Posted on 2005-11-28 00:00:00 | by onetruesmartass | [ Reply to This ]
      thats awsome! i love taco bell too! its my favorite place. its so true but it wasn't really funny but it was amusing. it also shows u have some talent too. keep writing like that!
    | Posted on 2005-11-11 00:00:00 | by tickles8 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a great peice because it light, funny and oh so true! I love taco bell, but I would have never thought to actually write about it! Yay for you to think of it first! Its going on my favorites list ; )
    | Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by Peachpitt | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice write. quite funny, but could be better. Very original. I have never seen a poem about Taco Bell. or met anyone who liked it enough to even attempt to write about it. Nice job. Keep up the good work.

    >:D
    | Posted on 2005-11-06 00:00:00 | by skullreaperX_X | [ Reply to This ]
      I found this really ammusing...I think it could have been funnier but I really didn't need to be. This was ammusing in how simple it was as well...I thought it was a good write...you stayed on topic and showed how talented you are...how many people write about taco bell?
    =P anyway good write. keep writing.
    Peace
    | Posted on 2005-11-06 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.