Oooo, bravo, I love ballads, especially your's and Megan's. I like Alec, the chilling laugh and blade lick, priceless. Reminds me of something I...wouldn't do...because I would end up stabbing myself before the fight even started.
Though I would fight even afterwards...I would inevitably fail...BUT I WOULD TRY!
Awesome second half to an awesome ballad...WRITE MORE, lol.
Sheeeit dude, I started reading it and remembered I had homework. I just wanted to let you know, that I DID notice it was posted and I DID start reading it. I will finish reading and posta real comment, I don't know when, since i have to work tomorrow, but hopefully it will be soon.
WOW. that's all i can say. I mean you keep the rhyming good all through the ballad and the imagery was just..i can see it in my head just playing over and over again. The flow was great two i loved how you worded it and everything. I can't really say anything bad about it to me it was nearly perfect. I guess some of the words were a little common but other than that it was great. keep up the good work.