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    dots Submission Name: For A Day 10-24-05dots
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    Author: xmangaXfreakx
    ASL Info:    13/f/IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 31/30/22
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 853
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 931



    Description:
       This is supposed to be a country song. I don't really listen to country, so I thought I might write one.


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    dotsFor A Day 10-24-05dots
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    Can I be your Cinderella baby?
    Just for a day.
    Can I be your honky-tonk honey?
    I'll show you the way.

    Come on, give it a chance, it's only 24 hours, just believe in romance.

    Grow up! What have you got to lose?
    Just listen to your heart...and choose!
    I could be your anything, I can be your everything, even if only for a day.

    I can be a goddess, I can act like a kid, so step on up now cowboy, and place yourself a bid.
    I can be a dancer, I can be a swimmer, I can be a rock climber if you like 'em wild.

    Come on, give it a chance, it's only 24 hours, just believe in romance.

    Grow up! What have you got to lose?
    Just listen to your heart...and choose!
    I could be your anything, I can be your everything, even if only for a day.
    Baby, I can be anything...for a day.




    Submitted on 2005-11-06 16:09:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was another well done piece and it fits the bill for a country swing (I suppose - I don't listen to country either!)
    It's lyrical and sing songy and has a lot of the elements a country song has!
    Love,Peace,Joy ~ Know,Experience,BE~~~
    tif
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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