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    dots Submission Name: Happy Halloween 10-25-05dots
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    Author: xmangaXfreakx
    ASL Info:    13/f/IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 31/30/22
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Childrens
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    Description:
       I had to write a song for my little sister's Daisy troop for their Halloween Party and here it is. It's pretty short though becase the kids had to memorize it.


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    dotsHappy Halloween 10-25-05dots
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    Spooks and goblins haunt the night.
    Are you ready for a HAlloween fright?

    BOO!

    Witches on their broomsticks, lollipops you can lick,
    Trick. Or Treat. Happy Halloween!
    Door to door, no candy store,
    it's time to trick or treat.




    Submitted on 2005-11-06 16:12:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that's cute...i think they would of memorized it better if it ryhmed but i liked it. It's a nice and differnet taste from the stuff i write so i liked it. I hope you your sister and her little troop had a nice halloween.

    ~~Danni~~
    | Posted on 2005-11-06 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]


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