Description: uh huh....i wrote that today too tell me what you think. Comments are much appriecated.
don't say you love me -------------------------------------------
don't say you love me
you don't and i know it
by the look in your eyes
and the way you never show it
you use to hold me tight
now you're the first to let me go
so how you claim to love me
i don't really know
i will always say i love you
thats true, i know that much
but to you it seems that i
am just another fuck
so please don't say you love me
i can't take that lie no more
just here to let you know
thats the one lie i can't endure
this was cool. yeah it's true...a lot of the time we're just out for some azz. sad truth. i'm ashamed of it...kinda. i'm sorry this happened to you though. i always remember that pain is my strongest motivation. good job babe.
Hey, this poem is great, as crazyhawk said, it hits home for me too. I can totally relate with this poem, and agree with crazy hawk as a guy, it not always us that does the hurting. I know how much it hurts to love someone, and know that they are lying when they say they love you back. Everytime they say it, its like you die, just to be reborn and destroyed again when they say it once more. Great write, you've captured the true pain and emotion of the situation. This is one for my favourties.
Hey, this is an awesome poem, I love this! Very good and original. Clever, too. I like your rhyming it was rather clever. This is a very sad poem, but it shows al ot of truth as well, maybe that's why I like it so much, great job!