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    Author: Atrip187
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Some Alley
    Elite Ratio:    4.53 - 81/76/21
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Misc/Romance
    Total Views: 185
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 413



    Description:
       Was bored and joined today so i wrote my current thoughts down no real method or purpose just a emotional vomit upon the shoes of whoever reads it LOL


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    A man has to be strong to survive,
    but stronger to face death,
    when all is over and you stand alone,
    when all is used and your lungs are empty,
    the decision to breath,
    the decision to stop,
    love has to be strong to survive,
    but stronger to face death,
    when all is over and you stand alone,
    the decision to breath,
    the decision to stop,




    Submitted on 2005-11-06 21:32:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very true write
    It definately made me think
    The words were short but
    Those words captured a very good message
    Man must learn by his choices for even if they are wrong
    He will still grow inside
    Good Job!
    Take Care
    Ron
    And thanks for the recent comments
    My poetry is meant to help us understand there is hope in life
    And once we see it we need to grasp onto it for dear life
    It will carry us into happiness
    | Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this, simple but true. Thank you for your comments on "Unhappy". I like how it realtes to people because the decision is yours and yours alone, no one can tell you stop living or to keep living. Well Done and welcome to Elite Skills.
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by babytinkerbelle | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, for emotional vomit, this is nice. It is probably better classified as Random Thoughts, but it is not terrible.

    Much better than some other pieces I've read.

    You'll do well I think. I'm going to keep an eye on you. I think you've got some potential.
    | Posted on 2005-11-06 00:00:00 | by Zabriel | [ Reply to This ]



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