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    dots Submission Name: Divinationdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Prose/Happy
    Total Views: 682
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 223



    Description:
       Do not fear madness as society does for there is something redemptive and comforting in not thinking along the lines of the majority.

    Speak to me spirit for your words I doth hear, spoken in the heart of forever...Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsDivinationdots
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    Glorious schizorphrenia
    colored divine
    in Love
    Vision dreamt
    gifted He
    from Above
    Dancing Shadows
    turn now
    to Light
    Madness gifted
    in one
    I fight




    Submitted on 2004-04-22 12:38:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      alright, alright, true, true. this is the shyznyt. I loved that opening, and couldn't agree with you anymore in what you said. Personally i found this very comical and easily conveyed, which is odd for me considering the only schizo i knew tried to kill my sons mom, fortunately he was dumb enough to do it in front of me. or maybe it's because of how you fromed it and set the reader up for it that happened? hmmmm, lets give you the benefit of the doubt and say the later, yeah, ok, bye now
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      I have to admit to a simple minded suffering when it came to that one, but I LOVE The description to death. If you take that description as an opening to a poem, hon, you have got somethin!
    Not that the prose wasn't good, like I said, us simple folks didn't know what the heck you were talkin bout .
    | Posted on 2004-04-22 00:00:00 | by Oracle | [ Reply to This ]


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