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    dots Submission Name: PSYCOSISIS?dots
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    Author: Atrip187
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Some Alley
    Elite Ratio:    4.53 - 81/76/21
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 210
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    Description:
       Just having a lil sick fun LOL LOL.
    Shut up!!!


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    dotsPSYCOSISIS?dots
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    YOU ARE INSANE!!!
    staring at that picture as if you want to see her,
    pacing as if you have to think,
    there is no option!!!
    Shut up!! promises were made-
    AND BROKEN!!!
    SHUT UP!!! A man is his Word
    Then your word is stupid!!
    Shut up or die.
    Your not mad at me your mad at her,
    Shut up please please let me think-
    You dont need to think-
    Shuut upp!

    Who r you talking to?
    Nothing Baby just thinking,
    Bout what?
    what i'm going to do to you tonight-
    and whats that papi?
    I havent decided yet-

    Yes you have!
    Shut up!!!




    Submitted on 2005-11-07 00:48:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ummm I am kind of not saying anything about this subject... OMG I think I got psycosis and it is not cool I do these kind of things so many times a day and it really bugs me when I start to think about things and that little voice comes in and starts barging into my life and then he starts disagreeing with me and gets me mad and in a bad mood and then I take it out on people around me and after I do it that voice leaves and just becomes a noise again... yeah weird but it is what I go through most the time... anyways love your little twisted fun that you have with your writtings...

    Jose J. Ortiz aka Josyman
    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]
      You obviously have a lot of pent up anger inside of you and writing I have found is the best out let that way no one gets hurt. Thankyou for sharing your work with me and the rest. I hope it helps you heal

    I am sorry to hear about yoour wife. It's awful to hear that people do that, but unfortunately they do and even worse is that they do it to people who love and care for them.

    Lynda
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by babytinkerbelle | [ Reply to This ]



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