it sounds like an addiction but it's not
it sounds like denial, what can I say to that?
in my defense maybe I'll just say that I'm careful
maybe I'll just show you that I haven't changed
maybe I'll just tell you that I love you
not that you would be decieved
you think that this is just another way to tell you to leave me alone
but I love
But I'm okay
and I'm begging you to fathom
that these aren't candy ciggarettes
but they really aren't that bad either
I'm telling you man
I liked this one too...who was it directed to? A specific person or people (our family) in general? I really liked this...and I know how you feel...espically the first few lines... it sucks when people wont belive that you not in denial... and what can you do in that situation? This was a powerful poem too...
I'm not really that in love with it. I'll give it to you honestly, I get tired of the poems where you're trying to ask someone to understand one addiction or another. And I can say that, cause you told me the Tony poems were getting old. I like the ones you write about me...They're always so vivid, and you get right to that pain. But, once again, you've said the same d*mn thing to me. Try writing a poem about Jessie, it's fun!
Well I have to say to me it sounds like my son talking to me. lol. But I did get what you were trying to get across. It was a bit confusing at first. But when I read it the second time it still was a bit confusing especially "I'm begging you to fathom" Not quit sure what you wanted to get across there. I think I know but not sure. But you are a good writer. Thank you for sharing with us. God bless