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    dots Submission Name: Two blondes on Halloweendots
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    Author: lost and alone
    ASL Info:    19/F/Sandiego,CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 159/140/58
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Description:
       This is about my best friend and I, and how well we get along and how we are part of eachother. we wear the same clothes at times and we finish eachothers sentences, and we've been known to be called Thelma and Louise.


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    dotsTwo blondes on Halloweendots
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    Your like my other half.
    When your not around, I get lost...
    I lose my way back to earth.
    We're like a half a pea in a pod.
    Your the lighter blonde.
    I'm the bigger ditz.
    Your the brains of our operation.
    I'm the mouth of our operation.
    And when we get together,
    we turn the world upside down.
    "See what happend was..."
    "we done gone crazy"
    We share thoughts,
    finish eachothers sentences,
    we even say the same things,
    at the same time.
    And we share half a half a brain.
    Everyone seems to think we're crazy.
    but the world will never know.
    It's almost Halloween,
    And it's gonna be a full moon,
    and thats when all the freaks come out.
    and we'll be at your doorstep,
    trick or treating.
    Taking candy from the kids,
    and scaring them all the way home.
    Happy Halloween,
    May you Rest In Peace,
    Before we find you.
    And thats to say the least.




    Submitted on 2005-11-07 10:22:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ohh to being on the same page. I have a couple of friends like that. When you spend all day explaining youself to others and then you get to visit with one of these people that know you so well, what a relief. (Someone that gets the joke, knows the whole background to the story...etc.) This is just the best bond in the world that you can have with someone. Someday, I hope to find this trait in a guy!
    | Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by mon28 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very cute poem. I had a best friend like this when I was in school, we werent blondes but the bond was similar. Reading this just made me think of her and all the good times we had together. She ended up getting married like most of my friends did and our relationship kinda dwindled and then she had kids and we ended up losing touch. Now I dont know where she lives anymore and it kinda bums me out that we didnt keep in touch. I like this poem. It is lighthearted and put a smile on my face. Hopefully you will keep in touch with her no matter what because if you start to drift, it only gets bigger and bigger and then you'll end up with regrets. Thanks for sharing this. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      that is great yu have such a bond with your friend. I had a friend like that. We could read each others mind. Finished sentences and had crazy times. But we lost touch. I miss her and she moved away. Any ways a good write. THanks for sharing with us.
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]
      This was rather cute. It sounds as if you and your friend really share a bond together. Like nothing in a million years could break you two apart. Gives it a sort of happy tree friend sense of mind.

    And The Torn badger Cries.
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]


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