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    dots Submission Name: An Etruscan Glow of Yesterdaydots
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    Author: Cigarz
    ASL Info:    35/M/NH
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 258/183/50
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 193
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 655



    Description:
       Free thought, as I haven't written anything new in a few days worth sharing. So, to submit 'something', here, in following, is a free form experiment in passive expression.


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    dotsAn Etruscan Glow of Yesterdaydots
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    How apt the description
    of Madalena's choir,
    subtle waves of soulful notes,
    pleasant in a summer's eve.
    A harbor floating aged,
    draped in Blue and White
    craft in wood,
    red wine soaked
    drenched in the wrinkled facade
    of local treasures.
    Personality derives,
    explodes in stereotype
    and commonality.
    Solice sought and received
    from Euphora's door,
    virgin saint of grape.
    The sun weighs
    heavy,
    drunk with duty and passion.
    A day ends again,
    the glow passing soft
    into the eyes
    of a tourist.




    Submitted on 2005-11-07 11:30:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was beautiful. I really enjoyed the imagry I got from this one and I actually liked the little transition from metabolical meaning to literal. This was intresting and well written. I really don't know what to say about this one...I defintaly liked it and can't think of anything to say negativly. I have nothing but praise for you. very captivating write. This was just the right length, flowed well had inspired choice of words. This piece was great in just about every aspect that a writer would want poetically speaking and I didn't find any gramatical issues withi it. great job overall thanks for the good read. keep writing. hope to read more from you in the future.
    Peace
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      'Solice sought and recieved, from Euphora's door', what an incredible line. Great work! The only downside is the very last line, it kinda goes from metaphorical imagery to reality, not subtle enough i guess.
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by Kane Martyr | [ Reply to This ]
      I saw a beautiful view of Italy when reading this write

    It was very well written and captured my mind
    Great Job Cigarz

    Take Care
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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