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    dots Submission Name: Cave of Virginsdots
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    Author: oixi
    ASL Info:    50/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 196/242/97
    Words: 247
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 727
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    Description:
       A poem (rhyming couplet) in tribute to the Himeyuri girls who were killed by an American gas attack in a cave serving as Japanese Hospital. It now is the site of a War Memorial in Okinawa called the Cave of the Virgins.


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    dotsCave of Virginsdots
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    Only fifty-one were left in our caves
    When the enemy surrounded us.

    As nurses, we schoolgirls worked like slaves
    Amongst torn bodies spouting blood and pus.

    Imperial soldiers once so proud,
    Serving the Emperor in his glory.

    Now in darkness waiting for death's shroud,
    The Rising Sun sets to end our story.

    The army surrendered and abandoned us here
    And in the darkness of our cave we weep.

    Once honored as Princess Lilies without fear,
    The sick and injured warriors we keep.

    The Himeyuri girls, school of the elite,
    Made nurses when Americans came.

    Left in our cave with Japan's shamed defeat,
    So too we share in the shame.

    We began at two hundred or more,
    In the dark caves treating the dying.

    Through damp dank death, we've crawled along the floors
    To tend those screaming and crying.

    All the soldiers have gone, retreated or dead
    And fifty-one Princess Lilies remain.

    Shouts for surrender echo from overhead
    And our fear drives us near insane.

    We will not surrender in fear of our fate,
    As a gas bomb in our cave is sent.

    For any hope to live seems much too late,
    When the bomb explodes and lives are spent.

    Only five survive from the blast and the gas,
    Where hundreds lived as nurses and surgeons.

    The horror of war at this spot would last,
    Known forever as the Cave of Virgins.




    Submitted on 2005-11-07 11:35:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow I to feel the emotion. Brings tears to my eyes. It is a very good write. Thank you so much for sharing with us. I look forward to reading more of your work. You are very good.
    God bless
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. I can feel so much emotion and power in this poem. It's like a great rush of feeling and other such things just pouring out. Great job. It says so much, I'm not sure if it has more than one meaning, but if so, please let me know. I'm curious.

    And The Torn badger Cries.
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]



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