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    dots Submission Name: your namedots
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    Author: andnow
    ASL Info:    19.f.wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 136/135/42
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       i like names


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    dotsyour namedots
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    Your name is a noun,
    nearly synonymous with affection.
    Love doesn’t even begin
    to scratch the surface
    of your meaning.

    I etch it in every
    place I find myself.
    Always aside mine,
    a verb.
    One defining emotion.

    I carve each line
    with such precision.
    Trace the outlines
    with my fingertips.

    This way we’ll exist forever.

    We can create permanence.




    Submitted on 2005-11-07 19:24:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Like a child that craves its mother so must we have a name? Your words were thought provoking and made me smile because it made me think of a nursery rhyme I knew as a child. Thanks for the read and if you get a chance come read some of my stuff and tell me what you think ok?
    Kelley
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      this was a sweet poem. i like how you never use the actual name but describe what it means to you in such an innovative way. good job
    | Posted on 2005-11-07 00:00:00 | by onepieces | [ Reply to This ]


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