dear you -------------------------------------------
i know you're there
i'm not alone
you are here
growing in me
can you feel all the things i'm going through?
i wonder.
can you hear me?
i'll keep you saife
until i'll be the one to destroy you
but i'll love you still
always.
it really interests me that your poems are always so different from the rest... where do you think of these unique ways of portraying your poem this one could have been made longer, to give the reader more idea and knowledge about your thoughts... but its all up to you john* 3/5
this poem is very interesting but sounds like it is unfinished and not at all clear on what you are talking about but it is a good start for a great poem I hope you will think about it and maybe revise this one I would be very interested in reading it if you decide to do that, still a great start though I did like it so far.
Submission Name: dear you
