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Economics Test

Author: Lafferty
ASL Info:    18/ female/perth WA
Elite Ratio:    5.55 - 39 /20 /15
Words: 127
Class/Type: Rant /Venting
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sorry teenage angst thing is bad. Actually wrote it is my test and my teacher is called Mr simon.

Economics Test

Stony silence from the dark void
A glimpse of the year
But no answer forthcoming
A child hides in cold and the dark
The decisions before her daunting
Till two am the night before
A dog named Simon prowls
Watching the strugglers from the herd
What he knows he won't tell
Scarce the energy to lift the pen
Her own weakness disgusts her
'Fuck off' I say to prying eyes
I do not want my weakness laid bare
But it doesn't matter
Because everyone can see me
Limping in the tall grass of my dreams
The soft pale underbelly
Vulnerable to the slash of teeth
From the dark child within
trying to escape the void
But how can I let that darkness into the world?

Submitted on 2005-11-07 21:17:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  nah, i like the "teh", its very h@XX0R.

good poem. not one of your best, but still above the normal stuff you find here.
| Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by dublhelix | [ Reply to This ]
  its very intimidating until i read it was about a test. even then i can feel your pain. was the test really hard? was there some sort of consequence to bombing the test? im intrigued...
| Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]

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