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    dots Submission Name: Steps to heavendots
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    Author: DAlin
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 82/137/75
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsSteps to heavendots
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    Eyes meet eyes
    Just next to never,
    Our hearts
    Are now forever.





    Submitted on 2005-11-08 10:19:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sorry, but I think you should add some more to it. There's just not enough conveyance of though for me to get any meaning from it. But it would be a good start to something longer. Hey, just my opinion. Lots of luck,
    bgj
    | Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by bgj | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this, though short it relays very strong feelings.
    its really amazing how something short like this can portray something so much bigger,
    take care
    ~jennifer
    | Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by joy7542 | [ Reply to This ]
      well that was um... short... but to the point i guess... im not sure its exactly poetry but maybe more of a quote of some kind. But it was good.
    | Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by the_forgotten | [ Reply to This ]


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