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    dots Submission Name: killing you, killing medots
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    Author: frozenflame
    ASL Info:    22/m/elsewhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.31 - 151/231/68
    Words: 269
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 799
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    Bytes: 1738



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    dotskilling you, killing medots
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    I still hear my voice
    It's calling in my head
    But if I had only one choice
    I'd leave it left unsaid

    I try to reach you
    But my senses get so blurry and I
    I try to tell you
    But my words come out so muddy and I
    If there's one thing that I should let you know
    is stay with me
    But I keep fighting
    And I'm finding my injustice is just

    Is killing me
    I cannot breathe
    Don't let me go
    Or this will break me

    My inner voices
    Are part of my disease
    'Cause it's pushing me to hurt you
    But hurting you
    Is just killing me

    If I can't have you
    And the dreams I put inside my head
    I would not leave you
    And I'd keep you here until I'm dead
    You think I'm strong well I'm not
    There's a gun in my head full of led
    I wanna use it
    But I can't abuse it
    And that's why

    It's killing me
    I cannot breathe
    Don't let me go
    Or this will break me

    My inner voices
    Are part of my disease
    'Cause it's pushing me to hurt you
    But hurting you
    Is just killing me

    The words i've said
    Have hurt you more
    There is no end
    So what are you waiting for
    I should have left all my worries
    Unsaid

    My innver voices
    Are part of my disease
    'Cause it's pushing me to hurt you
    But hurting you
    Is just killing me

    'Cause killing you
    Is killing me




    Submitted on 2005-11-08 12:28:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      what was the original? sorry im nosey. hmm. i thought had killer instinct. like the double edged sword. it's killing you it's killing me. i'm love'n the last stanza
    | Posted on 2007-02-04 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      My inner voices
    Are part of my disease
    'Cause it's pushing me to hurt you
    But hurting you
    Is just killing me

    killer lines. simply killer. i didnt care much for the second stanza. it just didnt seem up to par with the rest of it. but this was a good write.
    | Posted on 2005-11-21 00:00:00 | by namesdontmatter | [ Reply to This ]
      Yay I am the first and only one to comment one this one (sorry I know cheesy but what can I say I am cute). Ok there is a typing error but besides that it is good. I like how this is about the words you use instead of the actions. Remember you were the one who said words are your ammo and your mouth is the gun and I have been there a few times. I really don't think when I speak. Listen to your inner voices just don't let them control your outcome. This is a really good write and I am really to happy to see that you are posting again. And sorry it took me awhile to comment on it.
    Love You,
    Baby Girl
    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by sweet_innocence | [ Reply to This ]


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