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A Wedding Night's Passion


Author: LadyMustang
ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia
Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 222 /171 /71
Words: 234
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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The passion between a husband and wife


A Wedding Night's Passion



" A Wedding Night's Passion"

It's a clear night outside tonight, My love
the stars are shinning so bright. As we lay together
once more,Our passion is stronger than the time
before.

Come closer so the flicker of my flames can ignite your fire.Then our bodies can intwine in the explosion of desire. As you touch me there I can feel my temperature get high, As your hands play down my thigh.

As our bodies flow up, flow down our desires go beyond just affection, When your love is within me so deep it's a capitivivating satisfaction.

We gaze into each other's eyes and the passion is shown all over our faces,As our bodies fold together in a sensually embrace.

Show me what you're feeling so I can touch the deepest part of your soul, We can feel the rising ecstasy
excelerate our hearts as one whole.

Darling my every desire your passion does capture,As we make love being this way is a paradise of complete rapture.
I am so thankful you came out of my dreams and into my life, At this moment we give to each other the purest of love as husband and wife.

I shall not forget the love that we made until
the dawns early light, As this is the passion of our wedding night.

Written By: LadyMustang




Submitted on 2005-11-08 14:29:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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" A Wedding Night's Passion"

It's a clear night outside tonight, My love
the stars are shinning so bright. As we lay together
once more,Our passion is stronger than the time
before.

Come closer so the flicker of my flames can ignite your fire.Then our bodies can [intertwine] in the explosion of desire. As you touch me there I can feel my [temperature] get high, As your hands play down my thigh.

As our bodies flow up, flow down our desires go beyond just affection, When your love is within me so deep it's a capitivivating satisfaction.

We gaze into each other's eyes and the passion is shown all over our face[s] ,As our bodies fold together in a sensually embrace.

Show me what [you’re] feeling so I can touch the deepest part of your soul, We can feel the rising ecstasy
[accelerate] our hearts as one whole.

Darling my every desire your passion does capture,As we make love being this way is a paradise of complete rapture.
I am so thankful you came out of my dreams and into my life, At this moment we give to each other the purest of love as husband and wife.

I shall not forget the love that we made until
the dawns early light, As this is the passion of our wedding night.
| Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a terrific piece, evocative and passionate. Other than a few grammar and spelling mistakes, wonderful work!

Peace,

Joe
| Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very good Wilma. For me, you got the balance right between love, passion, desire and the erotiscism that intermingles and weaves its way through the poem.

I like this style, it is highly effective, and you can see that the majority of comments are from men - for obvious reasons.

Well done.

Frank.
| Posted on 2006-06-14 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  Whew * as he wipes his forehead*

That was intense took me a few minutes to cool off, and this wasn't even meant as an erotic peice. It was really about love but the passion came through.

Very nice write! Realy enjoeyed this!

Steve
| Posted on 2005-12-23 00:00:00 | by SHRINKSDR | [ Reply to This ]
  The passion between two people that are so totally in love and committed to one another is magic...Nothing dirty about this...To be able to bring each other to total ecstasy is God's design...A very good write!

Smiles
~Linda
| Posted on 2005-12-11 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
  I would have to say that, if I ever get married, I don't know what the night will be like. :. I'm not really the type to jump head first into lusty sex. I guess. I just -- I'm just fed up with being alone all the time and if I got my boy then I'd probably just snuggle him to death... n_n 'm sorry I read this when I wasn't in the mood to give you a thoughtful response.

*sigh*
-Mi.
| Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]
  wow yet again I'm at a complete loss for words. this was incredibly well written and explained the passion two people can have very very well. the whole thing was great and so many lines stuck out this was all around one of my favorite poems probably on this site as a whole. amazing write. this is definatly another favorite and I hope you keep writing this well.
Peace.
*blazing deathwish*
| Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]


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