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    dots Submission Name: Two Steps at a Timedots
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    Author: emo-tastic
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    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTwo Steps at a Timedots
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    Paranoia increases the salinity
    of the water we drink
    (shared-straw-intimacy)
    between our arms we shift
    and I wonder what they've said
    when I was downstairs

    (two steps at a time)
    the upholstery squeaks beneath
    our jerky dance
    juice-stained-beer-stained upholstery
    which falls into the order, classified
    (or easily dismissed)

    We're not sure what our thoughts
    surmise and begin to feel
    dumb, submissive.
    Upholstery dances and then so do we.




    Submitted on 2005-11-08 15:35:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      quite unique, to put it simply. the message seems to be simple, to me it says iterpret this yourself. it gives no exponential clarity yet draws a peculiar scene which can vividly be pieced with the fairest of imaginations into a picture that can be just as the piece. be well
    | Posted on 2005-11-09 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]


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