Description: A poem written to my sweetheart after spending time in a state park. I'm not really sure how I feel about the title but I couldn't think of anything else. Feel free to make suggestions.
Roaming with you -------------------------------------------
A black and white of you in my mind
An imprint on my heart
Deep breaths echoing against the walls
As my body silhouettes yours
The trees an etching on the setting sun
Cool river trickling,
babbling a melody with the trees,
A counterpoint to my heartbeat.
I love nature - and you'll notice a lot of mine too are inspired by nature. I live in Northern Cali - Placerville - outside of Sac and I spend a lot of time at the river and in the foothills and mountains. This reminded me of a poem reflecting a photographic black & white - like Ansel Adams - and I'm glad you have these times to commemorate and reflect on! Great! Love,Peace,Joy ~ Know,Experience,BE! tif
wow even in it's simplicity it manages to capture a feeling that most could not in a hundred words or less... I really really like this piece sis! Bravo!
Submission Name: Roaming with you
