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Maybe the stars from above know the answers to all our questions.
They see everything from living up above.
The stars know the truth of our lies that we continue
The stars can hear our cries and regrets
They hold what no one can.
They are formed by the sins we only commit.
Too many stars
Too many lies
Nothing is so real like the stars from above
The sky is quilted black, while gorgeous green eyes looking up at the stars
Looking at everything at alls might
Seeing so much not expected
Maybe it's all in the stars from above.
| ooo i like this one. i get that youre saying that the stars know everything, they basically sense guilt on a persons conseience. i dont really get where you go after that, but i like the initial idea.||| Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by andnow | [ Reply to This ] || I like the imagery you've created and the kind of message you are putting across. The only thing that I really keep getting distracted by is the flow. Having short sentences then long ones, and changing it abruptly makes it harder to read. I agree with Danni when it comes to the meaning|
|| Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by Kalinda | [ Reply to This ] || Sometimes the times you have no idea what you are saying the product is the best, if that makes any sense. I like it, though, it's very interesting!||| Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by risingrockstar | [ Reply to This ] || I kinda think that you're saying the stars are ominesent (spell cheak?) that they are all knowing. Sort of how my friend says that the walls are listening you're saying teh stars see everything hear everything and know everything. They know when we're lying tellling the truth etc. I think this is a good train of thought. But that's just me.|
|| Posted on 2005-11-08 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ] |