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Submission Name: Marshmellow dots

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Author:	Atrip187
ASL Info:	21/Male/Some Alley
Elite Ratio:	4.53 - 81/76/21
Words:	62

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	157
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	411

Description:
It actually has a meaning- Betcha Dont know what it is!!! LOL

Marshmellow dots

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A marshmellow?
i have been called a peice of shit,
a faggot or a lazy bum,
a marshmellow?
This is some serious shit,
why do i feel so dumb,
a marshmellow?
i cant beleive this shit,
It gotta be the rum,
A marshmellow,
Fuck this shit,
I gonna make his momma face numb!
A marshmellow I got your marshmellow...
poo poo head!

Submitted on 2005-11-09 04:00:10 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!

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  Ok, i may not understand this, but i still think it's hilarious!

you and your friends are drunk, at a bar, and someone calls you a marshmellow. and you are all the mroe offended for not knowing what the [censored] he even MEANS!

strikes me as hilarious.

especially poo poo head. that made me smile for a long time.

i admit i may have entirely missed some deep signifigance, but i really enjoyed it this way. :-) good write.
| Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by AptPupilofLife2 | [ Reply to This ]
  Is it possible someone called you soft and white? In any case, I'm not sure how offended you may have been (if at all) by the slight. Based on the tiny bit of info in the body of the poem, I can't help but assume this is pretty inconsequential, like being offended at roadkill. You may have to clue all of us in on this one, or consider it humor. Keep writing.
| Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
  What? Kind? Of? Meaning?...

I see no meaning, but that's ok because when I read it I just went bug eyed. I started to crack up and the funy thing I was eathing marshmellows when I read this so I kinda lost my appetite for them...

Anyways you may want to capatalize some things please!

Ja Matte!
| Posted on 2005-11-09 00:00:00 | by akaietowa-ru_18 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hee hee! Ummm...ok...OK!This is most bizarre and I would have to assume this has some sort of significance to it haha! But I have no idea what that would be. I will say this much...you kinda made me laugh with this and that is pretty cool. I hope this write made you feel better and if ya get the chance maybe you could clue me in on what the fu ck this means. And ya know, marshmallow aint such a bad thing either, you must be a softy!And S'mores are good too...yum yum yum! Take care.

Lorna
| Posted on 2005-11-09 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  tis marshmAllow, actually. o.O yeah, stupid, I know. and personally, I LIKE marshy-mallows. Especially when you roast em. -pokes you with a mallow-stick and eyes you- Anywho, cute little poem, not sure I understand the meaning, but then again, it's like, 8:30 in teh morning. >.<
~Sicobe R. Crow
| Posted on 2005-11-09 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]

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