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    dots Submission Name: Dropsdots
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    Author: auntwheezie
    ASL Info:    45/Female/Dartmouth NS
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 75/57/18
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 216
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 521



    Description:
       This was written 4 yrs ago the day after my 41st birthday. A day not many people in NY will forget. Sentiment aside I would like an honest opinion on the content and how it is put together.


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    dotsDropsdots
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    valleys where there should be none
    grey snow blanketing each and every crevasse
    sticking, hardening in the noon day sun
    drops creeping slowly, burrowing
    leaving a trail of their passing
    running here, there as they find
    the easiest routes for their journey
    stopping temporarily,
    gathering others before reaching
    their destination
    then...
    slowly dripping onto the shirt below
    staining the soot with sorrow.






    Submitted on 2005-11-09 08:23:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Honestly I ahve no idea what you are writing about here but I would love to know. I would very much like for you to explain it to me then I could read it again.
    Sorry but I missed the meaning,
    !doc'
    | Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by dr_tigger | [ Reply to This ]



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