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    dots Submission Name: Who Will Be Brave Enough?dots
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    Author: auntwheezie
    ASL Info:    45/Female/Dartmouth NS
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 75/57/18
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 185
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 640



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    dotsWho Will Be Brave Enough?dots
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    Hate!
    a fog, slowly eating
    away as it covers
    your soul

    Murder!
    a result of hate, passion,
    fanaticism, hopelessness

    Pain!
    losing loved ones, watching
    death, seeing hate

    Frustration!
    knowing you can't stop it
    being left to wonder why

    Tired!
    burnt out shells
    covered with dirt, eyes
    red from crying or the
    smoke and dust

    smoke everywhere, tears,
    pain, death, life
    where does it end?
    why does it have to be?
    who will be brave enough to stop it?




    Submitted on 2005-11-09 09:58:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm unsure where to start with this. I'm wondering what this piece is about. Your title doesn't explain much & your piece kind of rants on... I guess I simply didn't 'get it'. If it's retaining to all the crap that happens in life... I would suggest your own quote.
    | Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by Tonya V. | [ Reply to This ]
      WTF? you are a great poem writer when it comes to making poems that are stupid as hell. but other than that i did not enjoy this poem. delete it or make it better.
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by insphered soul | [ Reply to This ]



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