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    dots Submission Name: The Mating Gamedots
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    Author: onetruesmartass
    ASL Info:    30/F/Wa
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 934/791/77
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Misc/Comedy
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       Dating sucks...alot.


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    dotsThe Mating Gamedots
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    It doesn't matter
    How hard I try.
    I just can't figure out
    The mind of a guy!

    When out in a bar,
    Giving a flirt and a wink,
    He seems interested.
    Atleast that's what I think.

    But no, he's just that way.
    Looks at flirting like a sport.
    Well, didn't see that coming.
    Man I feel like a dork.

    Now that guy,
    Not him, the one over there.
    He's just a good friend.
    What? He thinks we'd make a great pair?

    But he's never said
    Anything like that to me.
    Well shit.
    Guess I just didn't see.

    Flirting, touching, kissing
    Always have to think
    What's this person after?
    Jesus, I need a drink.

    It always ends up
    I get my signals crossed.
    No matter how easy-going I am
    I'm always lost.

    Oh forget it!
    I'll never figure this out.
    People should just carry signs,
    Saying what their about!




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      oh my god you've seriously said it! guys are so hard to figure out! hahaha this is so true! i don't think any girl would ever be able to figure out what a guy is thinking. they are so strange! this poem has got a nice rhythm and ring to it. it makes a good "girls only" rap. hahaha this one really made me laugh nice job here. keep writing and if you ever do figure out how to understand a guy, please let me know. i'm dying to find out.
    | Posted on 2006-01-05 00:00:00 | by hayl | [ Reply to This ]
      
    This got to go to my favorites, its so on the money its crazy! the rhymes, the flow, it meaning, hotttt. I can relate to the fullest with this well written piece!
    *Keep up the great work*

    Singlerose:)
    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by SingleRose | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL, AMEN!

    the dating world is just so messed up! and the older one gets, the worse it is! you know it used to make me sooo frustrated until i read this new book and it sheds some amazing light on the whole thing...i can give you the title if you want it...i promise it will blow your mind...

    anyways...its nice to get a little chuckle for the plight of folks like me...nicely done!

    -Nikki
    | Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by stolie77 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yep, true on both sides.. this is.
    A real piece of writing. The flirting. The wondering.. trying to "guess" what the other is thinking.. etc.

    Wearing signs? .. now that's a good thought..lol

    Enjoyable read.
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      You know what baffles me most? Men think that women are so blasted difficult to figure out!
    This was entertaining to read...I've so been here before. I think that's what made me so damn shy. Ah hell, who am I fooling-the whole world wants me! lol
    Either way, I don't think that it's very obvious to a lot of people until they walk up to you and start telling you how nice your shoes are!
    I really got into the rhyming beat of this piece of yours also. Great job!

    Candi
    | Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
      This is funny and real! The title perfectly fits the poem. and i am happy to know that i am not the only one out there getting there signal's crossed like " is that a stop sighn or is he signaling me to go or maybe i should just merge left!
    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by always thinking | [ Reply to This ]
      haha! This is very amusing. You know how sad it is that this is as true as it is?! haha! Dating is most definitely not easy, not easy at all. It is a shame that people seem to feel they have to pretend to be things that they are not and put on this huge act to impress. I really dont like people who are phony. Surely they must realize that the real person is gonna come out at some point so why work so hard to be fake in the first place. People are either gonna like you or they wont, plain and simple. Men and women alike do this and I find it funny. Just be yourself is my philosophy. Take it or leave it. Very cute and entertaining poem you have here. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      This is great, and everyone goes through this at one time or another. It's just so true the way we get signals mixed like looking in my direction may mean he is interested or maybe he's looking at the girl behind me.

    God am really quite gload Im not in the dating game anymore after reading your poem it makes it so easy to figure it all out.

    Well Done

    Tink
    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by babytinkerbelle | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved your poem. It is so hard to figure anyone out if you have feeling for them. Removed from a situation most people are an open book in public... I love to people watch... but when I feel a conection to some guy... or think there is one... I am as bad as a deer in headlights... trust me sometime you see what you want, and other times you are blind!

    Monica
    | Posted on 2005-11-11 00:00:00 | by mon28 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so funny Traci. i swear i thought this was a guy "thing" the whole time! i swore that women had a secret code of some sort, say fixing her hair would mean something, yet maybe her hair was in her eyes and it wasn’t the "signal" funny that now i see women have that same problem with men. very cool. i wish people would be more real about their intentions, i don’t like those types of games in social settings. that is one of the many reasons why i don’t do well in those type of environments. another is that people front they get loud and obnoxious, especially when they are around their pals. they do things they would not do alone on the street like "fronting" that’s when someone shows off and plays like they are something they aren’t. I’m better off at home that way if i want to punch something, i have a wall and not a face. hmmm back to the write here carrying signs yeah that would be something. very nicely done and it is good to know that women and men have that same problem of the dreaded mixed signals.

    ~mike
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      No dating is fun...
    Trying to figure out what a guy is thinking is like trying to figure out what a woman is thinking....just not gonna happen.

    Wait I take that back....you know what all guys think about....them three little letters.

    Nice job...and nice picture.

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      This is sadly true. People are so hard to read, and even if a guy flirts with you, he's probably got a girlfriend or a wife. There are also the guys who are your dad's age that flirt with you. The only guys that ever seemed interested in me were my opposite (more interested in football than anything artistic). Even when that wasn't the case, they were married to their painting or bands. Thankfully, I'm in a relationship now, but I recall this feeling well. Magnicat says that men and women are like different species, and I feel like there's more than a little truth to that. We're just so different. You have a few typos, and it should be "they're" in the last line." Good job, Amy
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm so glad I have a husband! I'm so glad I have a husband! I'm so glad I have a husband!

    Watching people dance around each other, literally and figuratively, is a really interesting pasttime. Watching the 'Will he, won't he? Does she, doesn't she?" makes me wonder how anyone ever hooks up.

    Wish everyone could just be open and straight forward about their interests, ya know?

    Loved the rhymes on this piece, and I got a good giggle out of the whole thing!

    Love ya!
    -Chell-
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by Chell | [ Reply to This ]
      This is pretty funny and horribly true. On both ends of the stick, ya know? I try not to flirt too often because of what you wrote, it just f*cks with peoples minds too much ya know? I like chells "Nice shoes..." philosophy but that doesnt work cuz its too gosh darn straightforward and honest, HA! anyway, have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      its funny and literally hits the nail on the head.

    i love the bit about getting the signal's crossed. i think its a problem for a lot of us!

    the couplet form also adds to the quick and upbeat feel of the poem.

    good job.. thumbs up!
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by Sanjhana | [ Reply to This ]



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