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Summer's Fall

Author: RequiemOfDreams
ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 97 /140 /38
Words: 150
Class/Type: Poetry /
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Think about nature and the nature of the seasons. Spring goes to summer and summer goes to fall... there is meaning and perhaps you should look at it carefully :)

Summer's Fall

It’s the fall of Summer, the year begins to end
And at the end of this year, I finally break the trend
For Summer's fall brings new resolutions
To fix life's many pollutions
And I look upon the the worsening weather
My eyes follow a free flowing feather
I feel it flow along, raped by the air
Going nowhere, all unaware

Now I am as an apple, free to fall if I wish
But if I hold on, I won't be served in some dish
To corporate fools, eating all they see
The proletariat, I won't always be
Rise in rank, race to reward
Go to college, so I can afford
To live a life of coins

And as the leafs fall around me, I grow
And as houses fall around me, I ripen
And from this height, I can see all
I see all this summer's fall

Submitted on 2005-11-10 16:08:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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