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Happiness and Depression

Author: t0_eazy
ASL Info:    26/M/Indiana
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Words: 101
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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I wrote this today, it's how I feel..sometimes I feel like life is great, other times...yea..

Happiness and Depression

I am trapped between worlds,
Happiness and Depression.
Where is it I belong?
That, my only question.

In one place I feel joyous,
Hopeful and carefree.
Spending time with friends,
Right where I wish to be.

But the other place is darker,
And no one is around.
Here is where I'm frightened,
Because I hear no sound.

Which place is trully mine?
I cannot make the choice.
I need someone to help me,
I must hear a voice.

In between is where I'll stay,
This is my confession.
Until someone can free me,
From Happiness and Depression.

Submitted on 2005-11-10 16:12:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  omg this one is awsome. i know how u feel. I'm bipoler so I'm always like that. A song usally changes my moods. i know that sounds stupid but its not. well i really like it. im goin to add it to my favs. if you dont mind.
| Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by crazygothchika | [ Reply to This ]
  I definately know how you feel! I have depression because of many, many, many things. One second I'll be happy and then one of those things'll cross my mind, and I'll get depressed again. Great poem.
| Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]

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