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Submission Name: Hello.... dots

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Author:	OrenroccA
ASL Info:	17/M/Virgina
Elite Ratio:	2.38 - 29/38/18
Words:	35

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	376
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	190

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Hello.... dots

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Hello...can anyone hear me?
Can anyone see me?
Does anyone love me?
I can hear you
And I can see you
I love you
So why is it so hard to notice me?

Submitted on 2004-04-22 17:19:35 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This is pretty cool so short though, still good despite that, ummm can't really think of much else to say other than that.
~*~Pryncess
| Posted on 2004-04-22 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
short and to the point, the beginning reminds me of a pink floyd song, "comfortable numb". pretty cool, I hope the person you want to hear you starts to listen.
| Posted on 2004-04-22 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]

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