This was freakin awesome! Once again, you were able to paint a clear picture in my head with what you were seeing. I love being out in the country...and this just brought me closer to that. Thanks for sharing!
This is a nice poem. I like the style and form you use here. The read itself is very cute and playful which put a smile on my face. I have to agree too, oooooh I love down! One of the best things about this damn colder weather is pulling out my enormous down comforter and throwing it on my bed. I just love it. So soft and fluffy and it is amazing how warm it is. Another wonderful nature poem. Nice! Take care.
Like the first person said, it painted a very good image! And it was actually a peaceful poem, which surprised me! I usually don't like happy, peaceful poems...they make me depressed even more, lol. Great write.
Wow, I really like this! It paints a vivid picture of fall, leaves on the ground, and all kinds of forest animals in my mind. I thought it was a beautiful poem! I also like the way you made the ends of the lines rhyme. Very creative. I'll definitely be adding this to my favorites list!
Submission Name: The Trail At Dawn
