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    dots Submission Name: A Simple Denouementdots
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    Author: canarddoue
    ASL Info:    16/F/MO
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 47/50/27
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Simple Denouementdots
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    Whoevers flesh you caress tonight,
    I hope it leaves you cold.
    Go ahead, let her burn,
    Your quickend breaths chill my soul.

    I can feel her nails in my back,
    Your betrayal I can taste.
    My heart is in my throat,
    The blood dripping shows my hate.

    I try to hold back my tears,
    The pain is just to strong.
    Tomorrow when you wake up next to her,
    Her spirit will be singing you a dejected good-Bye song.




    Submitted on 2005-11-10 17:10:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this poem. It shows emotion so well, as well as real pain. Its sort of in a half rhyme though, is that what you intended? Its great though. Keep it up.
    -Caroline
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by mysweetsuicide | [ Reply to This ]



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