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    dots Submission Name: Hatedots
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    Author: hidden_cry
    ASL Info:    16/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 23/25/13
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 216
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    Things Keep changing, I'm getting older,
    Still its hard to stay sober,
    I keep falling down,
    With every puff off this joint, it doesnt make a sound,
    I'm still hurting, all this pain,
    This is the only way to stop myself from hitting the main vein.
    I cant say i hate it,
    Cause i dont I love it when its lit.
    I cant say I love it,
    Cause I hate having to be on weed to sit.
    I love the smell
    And how its easy to sell.
    I hate the need,
    I have for weed.
    Because I cant even think,
    All I do is sink,
    Father and father away,
    Untill I cant even say,
    I'm sorry for being this way.
    Its gotten so bad I cant even sit,
    With every puff its harder to resits.
    I let go of the pain,
    This weed makes me sane.
    But still i hate the need,
    I have for this weed.

    By Ashley Whiteley




    Submitted on 2005-11-10 19:22:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I understand, what it's like, but also know that there is a way out. There's always a way out. I don't have a drug of choice, but I have seen things that you can't even imagine. And not with pot smokers, but rather with people who use hard core drugs, and I've seen many deaths, from over doses, hitting the wrong vien when you slam dope into your body, or when the glass pipe breaks because you've smoked so much dope that your spinning. and this is not something I recomend. I choose not to use any substance because of the things I've seen and lived around.
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by lost and alone | [ Reply to This ]



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