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    dots Submission Name: Explodedots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsExplodedots
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    Explode into vibrant light
    independence Day in Technicolor
    in transplendant delirium.
    Perchance a vision may
    flood your face
    like an innocent
    vanished in a secret heaven.




    Submitted on 2004-04-22 17:35:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This poem is like a firecracker. It is very pretty. Transplendant...does that mean some kind of changing, morphing splendor? Well, it sounds like that.
    | Posted on 2004-07-14 00:00:00 | by Black Rock Tractor | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like the 'Independence day in technicolor'. great image. great little poem. well done.
    | Posted on 2004-04-23 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]


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