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    dots Submission Name: Mr. Orange Tie Mandots
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    Author: xmangaXfreakx
    ASL Info:    13/f/IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 31/30/22
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 725
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Hey you guys! asically, I just went to my first poetry slam (btw, AWESOME!) must find more to go to! Could just be myself, sweet as silly! I wrote this poem about the guy who hosted, Mr David Miller, who afterwards signed my poem! I Love you david miller...u will always be MY orange tie man! if you dont get these things, then u have 2 go to one of his slams!


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    dotsMr. Orange Tie Mandots
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    Mr. Orange Tie Man,
    he was a loser in love!
    He speaks of fannypacks,
    and of clearance sales.
    He has curly hair,
    and a pretty sweet belt.
    He wrote poem called Suddenly,
    and he also wants to pull Britney...
    Spears. From the back of a truck.
    And honestly? I don't blame him.
    He's super cool and kinda sassy,
    Mr. Orange Tie Man.




    Submitted on 2005-11-10 21:32:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I sometimes go to open mic night - I'm not sure the difference between that and a slam? Anyhoo, they are a good exercise and it's nice to express and be part of expression!
    I'm sure Mr. Orange Tie Man appreciated!
    Love,Peace,Joy ~ Know,Experience,BE!
    tif
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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