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    dots Submission Name: don't testdots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsdon't testdots
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    closing down the country, I can't bust
    rocking the world around like slammed sluts
    don't know where it'll take me but I won't stop
    untill I influence the world to make that ass drop
    a proclaimed aberrant king, I'm the best around
    fuck you and your mom, I'll choke that ass for my crown
    you think you gonna take the only thing I've ever had
    I should drop a bomb on your head, you stupid fuckin fag
    don't run to my family with threats or any action
    anybody with brains know not to test for my reaction
    your ass in on fire, stop drop.. i mean
    jump in this pool of gasoline
    jump in the line
    now gimme some time
    and we smokin that weed, makes us all unwind
    now leave me alone, I'm gettin payed for my crime




    Submitted on 2005-11-10 21:43:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love that gasoline line you wrote killa. one step closer man, one step closer.

    Aberrant Kings for mutha [censored] life!

    robbin Hood
    | Posted on 2005-12-17 00:00:00 | by Robbing Hood | [ Reply to This ]
      can someone say mental illness? jk jk this was hot. I liked it. It makes us see a side of you that idk i think you already show? Anways this was a good write.

    ~~Danni~~
    | Posted on 2005-11-11 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this and it seemed to have alot of emoth=ion and it really showed the crazy side of you. i like that side alot!lol! it was funny and exciting and mad eme wanna stab someone...lol!ne ways i liked it!l8

    *Remember, a broken heart still beats...*

    Amber
    | Posted on 2005-11-11 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]


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