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    dots Submission Name: I'm Seeing Things (freeverse)dots
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    Author: JTrickly
    ASL Info:    23/female/
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 10/4/13
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/The pain inside
    Total Views: 623
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1138



    Description:
       When I wrote this poem it was in mind for someone I had been lusting after. And the reason I describe my feelings for that person in such a way is because I feel or rather just know he and I could never actually be together for many, many reasons. So this is jsut a way I've chosen to deal. He knows how I feel about him but at the same token I'm personally very disought at this current monent... so i guess this is how I look at lot of things,-like acceptance, and love and just in many points life itself and how I react or feel about people.

    All in all I'm just doing as my own personal quote says...


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    dotsI'm Seeing Things (freeverse)dots
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    I'm seeing things
    things that aren't really there
    -but I don't care
    weather it's love at first sight
    or at a blind man's sight-nothing,a blank
    a lost vacant stare

    I'm seeing things...
    things that I guess you can't see
    i'd like to believe
    that once upon a time you see
    you saw a blur
    a small aperation of what it is
    -or was
    or seems to be seen by me

    so yeah I guess it is just me seeing things
    things that aren't really there
    but I don't care
    cause maybe one day
    you'll see what I see

    you'll see me
    me as I see you
    a beautiful sight
    for eyes such as mine
    or maybe the light
    the rays from your beauty
    may blind me
    and close the world off from me forever
    or awaken me to another
    for you may not be really in my sights
    just in my eysights way...

    Either way
    I'm seeing things
    seeing things all the same...




    Submitted on 2005-11-11 01:38:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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