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    dots Submission Name: My New lost Frienddots
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    Author: whendt
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 902/387/108
    Words: 122
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       Some people say stupid stuff and do not even know they did?


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    dots My New lost Frienddots
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    Life is about seizing the moment
    Unbelievable when people say
    I wouldn’t do that
    We all could take notes from
    My new lost friend
    Not that my new friend is dead just lost from
    My heart
    Leonardo Da Vinci said:
    “He who wishes to be rich in a day will be hanged in a year.”
    My thinking got me hung and my mouth got me slapped to
    The ground.
    My heart goes out to my new friend with ambition
    I will not stand in your way he says
    Nothing can change my new friends mind
    I’m lost in my new friends eyes
    When all I wanted was to make you happy…




    Submitted on 2005-11-11 06:00:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that was awsome. i liked how u quoted divinci. and ended with ....

    | Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm...? I dont really understand this but maybe I am not suppose to. This one is obviously a personal one between you and your friend. I can say that we all do or say things we wish we hadnt and regret later. I dont know what else to say about this one. I dont get the meaning behind it. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      aww my gosh- is that like a love poem sorta- idk it seems like that to me, like, they yeah- idk how to put it but the last line makes you re consider what you thought the poem was about- gee what can i say its good.
    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by MysterydarkPoet | [ Reply to This ]


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