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okay this is a song i thought up it's not finished. Tell me what you think about it so far.
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verse one walking around thinkin bout what went wrong (yeah) every i see you (see you) the feelings get strong and i love you baby never thought we go wrong we did that's why i'm singing this song bridge we use to be so be so cool (cool) we never once thought to it let go we use to have an understanding (what happened to those times) when we would stay up late (stay up late) never thinking bout tommorow now things got serious where did hell did our love go chours haven't made love to you in a while everyday i feel on love down what too the times we use to love each other now everything wrong never thought i'd be singing this song but i am ( i am) i am verse 2 never thought you'd get cold never though i would scream and never thought that we would grow old and every time i see your face rember what we had where did we go wrong (go wrong baby) where did we go wrong |
Submitted on 2005-11-11 23:20:16 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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this one was alright. i think it would be better if i heard it performed. u spelled "remember" wrong in the third to last line. i think the title should be "singing this song"| | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | I'm not really into reading songs, but i liked this one. It was nice. I can understand what the person is feeling and that's good. Hope to see more of ur writing. | Check out my latest poem and tell me what you think of it. See ya! | Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ] | |
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