Peace by Poetic Cure

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Submission Name: Peace dots

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Author:	Poetic Cure
ASL Info:	49.f.mn
Elite Ratio:	2.97 - 313/137/33
Words:	52

Class/Type:	Misc/Love
Total Views:	261
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	431

Description:
just a quick poem about the peace in early morning as I sit here.

Peace

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Peace is serine
Stillness of life
Asleep and dreaming
Softly breathing
Hearts gently beating
Moon shinning ever so lightly
Stars twinkling in harmony
Wind blowing gently
Tree branches slowly swaying
Fallen leaves rustling
Wee animals playing quietly
Crickets symphony ever so softly
Night of loving peace
Gods amen before day begins

Submitted on 2005-11-12 09:49:44 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  thanx for yor comments on poets
and the encouraging words
yor poem was very uplifting as i could see myself in the peaceful place you spoke about
great write and read
thanx sandman
| Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  Isn't "IT" wonderful to sit and be inspired by the gifts of God and be able to write such a beautiful piece!

I liked the descriptive wording and feel like you brought the reader in.

Good job!
Love,Peace,Joy! tif
| Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  The words you used to describe this were perfect. I really can not fault this at all ! A very very good write - well done.
| Posted on 2005-11-13 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  I LOVE THE POEM I FELT A SPIRIT GO THROUGH ME AS I DID THE READ AND I BUT IT ON MY FAV'S
IT MADE ME RELAX AND FIND THE INNER PEACE AND MAYBE EVEN A LITTLE TEAR I LOVED IT
| Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by papalegba | [ Reply to This ]
  not bad at all-it is a very light, easy poem to follow. some of us are a little slower than others and waste a bit of time trying to figure out what the subject is before realizing that it explains itself in the layout and descriptions used.
| Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by auntwheezie | [ Reply to This ]
  i think your poem explains in very simple language the meaning of peace, proabably as you saw it when u wrote this poem. it communicates the message of peace in a ...how should i say...rather PEACEful manner ...lol...the imagery is very light, beautiful, serene and pleasant. it is a very light poem, something id like to read at any given point of time...easy to understand...very easy to relate to...as most of the things that u've mentioned are common to most people...they are the gifts of nature...good going!
| Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by mihir | [ Reply to This ]

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