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    dots Submission Name: AS MAN AND WOMAN WERE MADEdots
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    Author: papalegba
    ASL Info:    45/male/schenectady ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 52/42/28
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 783
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 740



    Description:
       FOR DAN AND CAROLYN'S WEDDING MAY 15,2005


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    dotsAS MAN AND WOMAN WERE MADEdots
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    TO SHARE A GIFT SO RARE AS TO
    COMBINE TO HEARTS THAT BEAT AS ONE
    GIVING TO EACH OTHER A SPECIAL MOMENT IN TIME
    TO BE CARE GIVERS AND FRIENDS
    FOR NOW AND ALWAYS AS SOULMATES DO
    BEING EACH OTHER'S LIGHT
    WHEN THE VISION DIMS
    OUR SPIRITS REMAIN IN GOD'S HANDS
    WITH CHRIST'S LIGHT TO SHOW US THE WAY
    HAPPINESS WILL NEVER CEASE
    WE FIND THE PEOPLE WE HOLD DEAR
    TOGETHER AS FAMILY
    AS DID CHRIST AT THE WEDDING FEAST
    WE GATHER IN PEACE AND FRIENDSHIP
    OH SPIRIT DIVINE GIVE TO US
    AND THOSE PRESENT
    THE GIFT OF LOVE TO SHARE
    TO SPREAD PEACE AND HEALING
    FOR THE WORLD TO SEE AND
    TO SHARE A GIFT SO RARE




    Submitted on 2005-11-12 12:25:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hi, a little soopy, but better than most, the thought is what counts. tom

    " SHARE A GIFT SO RARE
    COMBINE HEARTS THAT BEAT AS ONE
    GIVING TO EACH OTHER A SPECIAL MOMENT
    TO BE CARE GIVERS AND FRIENDS
    FOR NOW AND ALWAYS SOULMATES
    BEING EACH OTHER'S LIGHT
    WHEN VISION DIMS"
    | Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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