Description: This work of mine is the realisation I had from a lot of my experiences life had given me till now.The poem begins on a happy note and transforms into sadness and then comes hope further ending on a positive note,as it is in the beginning.So kindly read this poem and do tell me if u can relate to it, or whatever may be your opinion.Please feel free to express your thoughts on this poem.
Gift Of God -------------------------------------------
Jubilant people go around
With the light of joy like a firefly
And spread them through the ways they trode;
Life then seems so blissful and light
With dears 'n' nears just to love;
Eyes bear tears as such thoughts rush
And wish myself to be like one.
The sky so blue, the breeze so calm
And the waves so mild cause no harm
To those whose light is a twilight
In the lives of the ones in dark.
Neither me nor thou art known
Of what is kept in you and me
Which appeals to the passers by.
Later we realize the depth of Life-
"The Gift Of God, is our gift of life"-
So live it on until it ends
And praise it through until it ends..
i think it should deal more with the feeling of the gift of god the experience of the gift of god you go aroud the burning bush and avoid touching it you can see that it is hot but it is not you should never be afraid of looking god in the eye like most people are after all god is your father and treat him as such he/she has to know that you are alive and not afraid of... when god is slow at getting to my prayer list i just remind him of all the people that are on it and tell him to get to work sorry for the ramble