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    dots Submission Name: The Samedots
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    Author: Cassius
    ASL Info:    26/M/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 130/177/60
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 194
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 513



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       He is the same yesterday, today, and forever.


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    dotsThe Samedots
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    As we go along making our way
    People change but You are always the same
    Children grow old and memories fade away
    But You are always the same
    Before we start and after we end
    You will remain the same
    A cornerstone holding the world together
    The light that fills the dark
    You are always the same
    My life, My God, My savior
    Our hearts are forever changed
    Blessed is the LORD
    Blessed is the LORD
    For He will always be the same




    Submitted on 2005-11-12 15:05:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beyond darkness i find this poem like no other, and between the eternity I will make a simple line with the abrazive destroyed mind.
    DAlin
    | Posted on 2005-11-13 00:00:00 | by DAlin | [ Reply to This ]
      To be honest with you, I think the format is a complete mess. However, a nice subject topic, but not conveyed in the most appropriate manner. I'd say, space out the "always the same" part, and put another line before that. And maybe add some rhymes?
    | Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by Yclipse | [ Reply to This ]



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